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Always and Forever

If only there were such words,
Words that could begin to describe.
How much you have meant to me,
It was never, ever a bribe.
We've had our laughs,
We've had our tears.
We've been together for so long,
I've forgotten most  my fears.
So try to smile,
Tomorrow is my big day.
Don't worry though,
I wont go away.
We have had a share of times,
Both the thick and the thin.
All that time had past...
Where had you been?
Then one day,
I at last found you.
It was funny really,
With all that turned blue. :}
I must be going now,
Its off to the doc.
But don't worry about me,
This isn't my last bow.

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Written March 27th, 2003

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  • HayHay
    April 5, 2003
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    This is a really great poem also i love reading your poems they are so good and they express a lot of emotions and they are short and sweet
    love alwayz
    ~*Hayley*~

  • daisy
    March 31, 2003
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    i really enjoyed reading this poem, i can relate to it in many ways.


  • gooeygood
    March 30, 2003
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    i read this a couple different ways, and interrpreted it different each time. one sad, the other happy. and thats a good thing too, letting the reader draw the conclusion. nice write!


  • FinallyFound
    March 29, 2003
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    hmm, interesting, when you write poetry though, you should spell words out like tho, you should write though. it helps that way and it sounds better. good job on expressing yourself though. i did like this. good job