Hate me today to save your tomorrow
I'll cause you pain I'll give you sorrows
I'm a charmer at heart and I'll draw you in
I'll gain your love and get under your skin
But the truth all comes out in the end
And you'll discover who I am and comprehend
That I just broke your heart again
I'll make you hate that you love me
And I'll make you wish that you had me
But I'll always be just out of reach
I'll make your heart bleed, I'm a leech
Your pain causes my pain, and pain is pleasure
I cause this madness and mayhem at my leisure
Watch out for me I'm a predator
My love is tainted and my heart is cold
I'm so ungrateful but I'm lovely I'm told
I hate myself and I have no self-control
You'll hate me too, from the bottom of your soul
Just give it time, because I know, I know
That I will cause your blood to flow
Crimson paths of pain and sorrow
I wish I wouldn't see tomorrow
I don't want this pain and sorrow
I tried to warn you but you refused to see
Nothing good ever comes of loving me
The little faith I had in myself is lost
The faith you had in me is tossed
Hate me because I'm beautiful
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I'm sorry Scott and Amber and Rob and anyone else I've managed to hurt. -_-
Written July 3rd, 2006
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Very sad emotions here, penned very well, I can really relate to the feelings of hating yourself, but I don't think most people like themselves!
well done
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Thank you for the comment, you may of course use it on your page. My name is Jayme, and I'm really not much better at it... Oh well...
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I hate myself too. ive been going thorught some shit and I feel this everyday so just to let you know, you're not alone. I have already broken 6 hearts and I didn't want nor meant to.It was a great write. Such truth and self aknowledgement. I like that... and I was wondering if I could use this poem for my page, you will get all the credit ofcourse...i will just need your name unless you would like me to use your allpoetry name. So do I have your permission? And I hope that things get better and I hope that there is still hope for YOU.
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wow, way to be honest to yourself, or overly express your uh...........qualities.. anyways i liked it alot, i know a person just like you describe yourself =p "I'm a charmer at heart and I'll draw you in
I'll gain your love and get under your skin" brilliant ( dont get mad at me for the shitty comment ) -
Hmm. I like this but then again the bashing yourself is kinda harsh. But it's your piece so what can else can I say about that.
I'll make you hate that you love me
And I'll make you wish that you had me
But I'll always be just out of reach
I'll make your heart bleed, I'm a leech
^ I LOVE that part. I can kind of feel the love turn into hate. And I love the comparison you think you are to a leech. All in all I love this. Full of emotion.
Missy
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But I don't hate you.
This is a really good poem.
It's full of emotion and all that stuff.
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I hate myself -_-
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