the poet shall not sleep today
a simple verse, she has to play
as even though her heart may pain
her spirit fire shows its reign
she heals the heart, she warms the soul
the love she shares will make us whole
Author notes
for Carol... 
Option #5 - mzblondemoments
Written July 3rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Welcome to My World (Invite Only) by Pollycheck.
600 points, ended December 3, 2006, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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aaaaaawwwwwwww! *heart*
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Thank you for entering my contest. I could not agree with you more about Carol. I think that this poem fits here to a tee. It has a great meter and the rhyming does not seemed forced at all. You have done a good job on this one.
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I realized after I entered this that you had already read it before, I probably entered it in a contest.. haha! I love this poem, it means so much to me. Thank you for your lovely comments!
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Where was ???????
How could I have missed this before 
...aboslutely fantastic and I am not going to destroy this magnificent show of affection for a dear friend *Hug* (Chilli sends a 
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I believe this was before you and I met! Pre Queens of Fart days....
Thank you for keeping this wonderful, heartfelt poem sacred and not farting on it. 
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Wahoo, he loves it!
Thanks, Blackday, and have fun reading all of your entries! 
Kimberly G.
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Awwww. This is cute, sweet, and short. I love it!
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Princess Lynn Leia, thanks! Just had to write that out to see how it felt again.
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Wow!
short in words yet with such a powerful and heartfelt message. so lovely to read and beautifully written~
a joy to read and very inspiring writing~
wonderfully written from a caring heart~
lynn -
Congratulations on your win. You have done a fantastic job on this piece. I love this poem.
~much love~
carol
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it's so short, and beautiful. I absolutely love this poem, and I do hope Carol will enjoy it. Make sure you point her in this direction. Thank you for gracing my contest with your amazing words. I wish you the best of luck in the judging.
Keep writing,
they'll keep reading.
forever.
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Thanks, again, Raggyann! I appreciate you reading my poems and your comments. Wishing you all the best! Kimberly G.
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whjat a great poem
you qwords flowed beautifuly
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Thanks, Pollycheck! I wrote it for Carol... mzblondemoments, the one who is has her can of Stench-Be-Gone to fight your evil ways... heehee...
Write on!
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What a beautiful poem. I also feel the same way about poetry. When I am having a bad day, I know I can come to this site and read something the will lift up my spirits. Keep writing dear poet, for you have a talent for poetry that is very evident in the poem I have just read. Great Write.
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My pleasure! I fixed a typo... "my" was supposed to be "may"... in case you want to fix it on your Friendship hugs page so I don't look like a dork... heehee...
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Beautiful
Thank you this is so beautiful I love it! 
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