Green landscape and cool rivers flowing
Oceanic beauty and hilly serenity
Joyous flowers in ecstatic blooming
Sunny hopes and stars twinkle in Nature infinity.
God’s shadow for environmental peace
Mesmerizing with sparkles for stimulation
To make us calm and be at ease
Coax us with softening touch for meditation.
Caressing feel of pure essence of upbeat
Enigmatic and mysterious unknown
Saddening ripples making hasty retreat
Motherly embrace rejuvenates us to be grown.
Velvety touch in our progress and journey
Soothing care and smothering concern
Energize us to enjoy the colorful harmony
And her solace encourages us for our inner churn.
Heavenly Earth with natural abandon
Being the right place for tranquil feel
With its scenic extravaganza and love cordon
Let us chant for peace with all our zeal.
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Written July 3rd, 2006
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Hahaha!!!!
Best wishes.
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oh dear ...
I have to admit that I have not yet looked at your author's page and was convinced during reading your poem that you were a young lady, around 30 years old, at least this is the image that came into my mind and the energy of your poem, that I felt being very feminine and gentle, like a soft river flowing, kind of devotional ...
but now I know you are from india ... so I am no longer surprised ... the gentleness and softness I have often seen in people of indian origin has always touched me, especially in men.
I hope you are not upset with me for telling you this, I really meant it as a compliment, as I truly appreciate and honor men who have integrated the feminine aspects of receptivity and surrender in their being.
maa -
Dear maa,
You made this old man of 59 blush!
Take care.
manoj
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dearest eastern blue,
how wonderfully you have shown us the peace and beauty that is found in nature and the precious treasures of mother earth. what a delightful and uplifting homage is your poem, and how deeply it touches our soul in its innermost essence.
rendering glory and expressing gratitude in such an humble and devotional way is creating vibrations of bliss and peace which spread like the perfume of a jasmine flower, bringing blessings to all.
you are such a gifted and masterful poetess, bringing delight to everyone who reads your nectar-filled words.
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Thanks Sanya.
Have nice time.
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a wonderful write
A poem that carries such a deep message- the message of peace. Beautiful expression and a great rythm that makes the reader read on and on. If we are to be peaceful within ourselves, this world can be a better place and then this earth will actually become heavenly. I simply love the way you used nature as a symbol of peace!!
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