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Beautiful Eyes...



Beautiful Eyes... Sometimes I wish you could see
See what I am seeing when I look at you
Sometimes green but mostly blue, so beautiful
Unbelivably handsom, I hope you know
This is all true

Sometimes I hate you
Sometimes I feel like I dont even know you
Best of all'
There are times when I just want to pounce
Jump... and surprisingly be all over you

Glances that you give me
Sends chills up and down my spine
Touches that you give...
Touches that you think are playful or just normal
but they paralize me
Erouse me...
And even though I am your girl...
I hope at times with these touches
You would just take advantage of me

Make me yours, control me, but dont hurt me
Prove to me that you are real
Because when you make love to me
There isnt anything else I want to feel

*****

I look at you
Barely sitting but only a few feet away
In this box we call a bedroom
So focused in everything
that you do
Oblivious to the camotioin
Which swirls around you

These past few days I've found myself
Quietly, silently, observing
Observing all that comes to my view
But in my view, all I see is you

Forget everyone else in the room
Right now I am strictly focused;
Focused, only in you
Thinking; anticipating

When I get to be
With you

Author notes

Something I wrote for Brandon
Written July 3rd, 2006

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