Peace...
the tranquil
breath that flows
through me and out
in to the wide world.
On the wind as it is
carried from nation to nation and
one day will reign on
everyone everywhere filling them
with the tranquil
breath of
Peace...
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Written July 3rd, 2006
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this poem has a calming effect to it
wonderful -
Beautiful! Short sweet and awesome. I enjoy the short writes. I am not a poet who can write like this. its such a cool type of poems. I am not capable of it though. I encourage you to keep on writing. The background is the perfect complemen to yoru poem.
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if only it could beautiful makes me hopeful
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i love this,
this is so beautiful, so very lovely,
very peaceful and touching.
a short write with tons of meaning.
a really great job. -
it's simple, but its meaning is huge!!!
great job!
um, I mean, complex instead of huge! -
short but sweet
wow, its short but very good, you can writ poetry very well. i like this poem it is great. it flows together well, keep up the good work, i hope to read more of your poetry in the future,ttyl
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beautiful
this is beautiful..it drips with peace and beauty I rarely see in poetry here....I enjoyed reading this, it was a pure pleasure. I look forward to reading more of your work!!! -
dearest spirit cherokee,
the purity and simplicity of your beautiful peace-poem touches me very much. becoming aware of the tranquil breath that flows through all of us and spreads all over, touching every being, every atom in the universe, is so uplifting. nothing else has to be done really, just awareness of the already present peace is needed ...
words of deep wisdom and peace.
thank you from my heart.
maa -
awww so very lovely,
i truly enjoyed this a lot.
you have done a great job
this would be so wonderful if we all could do this.
it is so peaceful and touching.
thanks for sharing such a lovely poem
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