I'm tracing your name
In the bitter-cold air,
So the stars all dance away...
You're all mine...
I'm standing on my toes,
So I can see your eyes.
I can touch your face now...
You're all mine...
You wrap your arms around me,
Your heart beats against my face.
Keeping my mind at ease,
Knowing, you're all mine...
The sun and moon could dull,
No light would be present,
And still I would see you...
All mine.
Author notes
This is an unedited version of a poem I wrote for my boyfriend.
Written July 2nd, 2006
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Hehe...standing on your toes. Yes well. That I can understand hehe
Awww so cute! Love ya!
Meelz
Xoxo
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This is a great poem about love. I sure do like it.
Deke. -
aww, this is just the sweetest poem ever!
so fucking awesome...and i can totally relate...
your an amazing poet...you described this beautifully! and i really want to applaud you...but i cant as i have none left
but great poem! well done
x~Ree~x -
True
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha etc.
cute Meri
good write -
Hehe, and I still can't reach
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awe! sweet!! lol standing on your toes lol !!
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Addition noted.
- Nick S. -
this is really cute, this is a really really good write meri. keep it up.
Ms bubbles
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