My dear Waking the King
To you I give my oath
Now, you might find me a bit odd
But keep in mind that it takes all kinds!
I'm not a warrior, but a spy
I sneak past enemy lines
To spy on the action on the other side
And report back to thee
As for any unique characteristics I may have
Ahh. When it comes to fighting I have my ways!
Of course I don't fight unless extremely necessary
Swords I don't carry, nor do I wear black army hats
No sir!
I believe in fighting with whatever you can find on the ground
Of course, I always carry a torch or two
And I'll always have rocks and rubber bands
(hahahahahahaha Laugh it up! Just, wait and see!)
A true hero I am!
For I fight with an open spirit
But nevertheless
I lead a life of peace and freedom
So now that I have given my oath to thee
Please keep in mind
That it takes all kinds
To build a successful army!
Author notes
Okay Mark. I know this sucks but eh, here ya go. As I told you before, I'm in a mess right now so please just bear with me.
Written July 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Perfect Allie Needed Once Again (ONLY FOR INTELLIGENT PEOPLE) by wakingdevil.
328 points, ended July 9, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice. Very cute.
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Okay. You totally confuse me.
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Thanks Adritha aka Alex
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wow luff!!!
good job!keep it up shnuks.
luv an hugs.
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No, the exact opposite be true.
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very good
This is very good i got a laugh out of it this is very good i like the use of humor in this poem variety is the spice of life hope you are having fun take care love aunty b -
Ahh. So you call us copycats
When you are nothing but a hotheaded lad
You don't think before you speak
For your mouth works faster than your brain
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hahahhahhh =]
sweeeet write!!
and i totally agree, that it takes many varieties to create a succesful army!!!
.. or society..
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thanks Kristen
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Oh yes. And tell Lio to bring his ring!
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Mark. If you don't understand free verse, then why do you allow it?
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So you only write when you're in a good mood? Hmm.
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spies... oh my..
My hounds have seen you and shall report you to my king!!! scout around again and find that they have you by the feet!
Lady Shadowlyn Stone
Goddess Daughter
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I like this poem. Mind you I like most of your poetry. I like free verse. But I cannot write right now, I'm in a good mood.
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Yes, Cinny. I really do think that. Some people take this kind of talent for granted but, you don't you use it, and in a good way. TTYL
K.K.
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Okay I don't understand free verse so I read these as lines.The thought was good and the poem itself was good but the length of the lines were uneven.Altogether a quite good poem.Thanks for entering and best of luck
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You call us clowns and yet that title I have already given
You see? my misguided child, you are wrongly driven
To copy my words shows a lack of own thought
Tis hard to find new phrases, for brains thou hast naught
Plod on using used words and call many names
But take my warning and return to your games
Her Royal Highness
Queen Tulpen
Queendom of Inbetween
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HAHAHA, Who'd be afraid of you? Not me!
For you are nothing but a so called "Queen"
A sorry lost soul
Wandering inbetween
Waiting to get crushed
By your surrondings
All your army is,
Is a bunch of clowns in disguise!
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Thanks Aunty WolfHeart. Same to you!
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You really think so Kristen?
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Oh dear, oh dear this seems a war of spies
As usual from thy camp, a bucket full of lies
You had best watch your back for you all seem to be
Spying on each other, on Klink Bubblio and Me
So who is the warrior, how many spies in this army?
All using your wits and words in a way that is smarmy
You had better beware, for your flanks are filled
with so many spies and painfully unskilled
My confidence grows with each passing minute
A castle of clowns and loads of spies in it!
Her Royal Highness
Queen Tulpen
Queendom of Inbetween
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What do you mean not good? That was good. Great job,twin.
K.K.
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Ah, my own niece in the enemy camp. My old heart is withering.
But, she doth write good poetry. Well-written, everything
technically sound. So I say to thee, fair Blueberry, fight
well and never surrender!
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