you promised to always be there when things get tough,
to catch me when i fall.
so where were you when my whole world came crashing down?
never in my life did I need anyone as much as I did then,
but no one was there; not even you.
trapped in this inferno, I became their slave;
a prisoner on Death row praying my time would end.
thoughts ate me away, I decayed from the inside out.
razor blades plow this flesh creating lines of suicide
and as streams of crimson flow down my wrists,
i can't help but think of you.
Author notes
i might add on to this later, but i'm not sure.
Written July 2nd, 2006
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Very sad!
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No don't add onto it yannon. Its perfect the way it is. Check out the 3 poems i wrote they are pretty shitty but i attempted and i guess thats what counts right? Keep writing even if it suxz like mine because its good for you. I'm gonna keep lookin for more of your poems. Love you yannon!!
Love,
Mal


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