A lost cub wanders
Alone,walking to a pond
Sipping some water.
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Written July 2nd, 2006
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cute
awww its really cute ^^
hey, sorry that I haven't been on lately. =/ I've been on other sites. One is a really cool art and writing site!
I post most of my stuff on there now.
How everything's been alright!
Mom
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Thats so cute loved it... keep up the great work and keep writing more poems soon! Thank-you very much also for the lovely comment on my poem Family Portrait... Thank you again...
Talk to you soon From Princess Paige xoxoxxoox
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good write... vivid imagery... good flow of words
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A wonderfully beautiful haiku you have penned here. So simple and lovely and oh so serene. I simply adore it! Nice Job!
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I really like the two images you have captured within the first two lines here, though I'm not sure about your third line...
The revelation could have been with more of an AHA inside, capturing another nature scene instead of 'emotions' (Only senryu have these kind of emotions inside)
maybe sipping from water or something, stating that he is actually thirsty?
overall a great piece
I probably mentioned before that you don't have to use capital letters in a haiku?
thanks for entering
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Beautiful imager here I believe many times we all do this in life. Trying to figure it out. A lovely piece! Great job!
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Awww! That is sweet...a very cute and adorable haiku, with a nice imagery and meaning. Thank you for featuring this for us all to read, and keep the ink flowing!
SufferingFool
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