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Empty Inside

I feel empty inside
Emotionally shut down and burn out
Hurt and tired of all the bullshit
I wish I could just crawl away and hide
Find that small place where nothing can find me
Where I can be myself
What’s the use?
It doesn’t exist

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meh..
Written July 2nd, 2006

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  • FallingAway
    December 10, 2007
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    you took the words right out of my mouth.


  • passionate-poet
    November 4, 2007

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    i really like this poem i have felt this way many many times thank you for sharing such an emotional write. great work!


  • Seven Kinky
    May 31, 2007

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    I can't believe nobody's commented this! *first comment dance* Seriously, though, for such a short poem it's pretty damn good. I have to say that place does exist, though. It's the wonderful land of "screw you; I do what I want". It's taken me years to realize that, but I'm finally living the way I want. As you get older, it gets easier. I see this is almost a year old, though, so maybe you've already found that out. At any rate, nicely done and kudos.