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Spring Garden (haiku)

spring-
in my garden
tulips begin to grow

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Written July 2nd, 2006

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  • so pretty of a picture in a few words, thank you for this nature ku
    good luck
    Linda


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 22, 2007
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    "spring-
    in my garden
    tulips begin to grow" such a good haiku!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece!!! it was beautifully written!!! the background went with the piece really well too!!! thank you sooo much for entering!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!!




    -Steve-


  • myron silver member
    July 7, 2006
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    spring-
    in my garden
    tulips begin to grow


    a nice revision. well done.


  • Sumthinlifeish
    July 3, 2006
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    I like this.. but I have a hard time with Haikus. I feel like there's always something missing from them. But that's just me.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    July 3, 2006
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    Thank you for your helpful critiques!

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