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Best Friends No more

Best of Friends
Together forever
Never apart
Thought it'd be forever
I was wrong.

Talking stopped
Secrets never slipped
Laughs and giggles seldom
Best friends no more.

Two different paths
You one way I another
Seperate lives
Forgetful memories
Part our lives
Best Friends?
No more.

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Not one of my best but critique it!
Written July 2nd, 2006

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  • Foxydaze14
    July 2, 2006
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    I like this, it's simple. It's very true, usually when you are friends for so long something happens and you just lose touch or stop talking to each other. Great piece. Keep up the great work and keep on writing!