Hold me tight
In your hug
Let me sit
Right near you
Kiss me pationatly
With your tender lips
Whisper the words
I love, in my ear,
"I love you".
Does together mean
Eternity?
It should be
When I'm with you.
I felt warm and wanted
In your arms
I felt loved
By your kiss.
You got up
I slipped
Looked up at you
You turned the other way
Lft me and said
The words I dread most,
"Good Bye".
That Good Bye
Didn't mean the
Of the day
Week
Month or
Year
It meant for eternity.
Left me sitting
On the cold ground
Confused
Tears pourng down my cheeks
In a silent sob.
I thought you loved me
What did I do?
Love means forever
But so did that Good Bye.
Thats the end of you and me
Spread across the ground
Face burried in the grass
Crying my heart out
My brocken heart.
Author notes
I know I repeat myself a bit, but oh well.
Just critique it! 
Written July 2nd, 2006
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