Why must they be so mean to me?
Do they speak the truth?
Do I really exist?
Or am I just a figment
Of someone's imagination?
Would I be able to feel this pain
If I wasn't real?
Author notes
Written July 2nd, 2006
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Sad and sweet write. Very easily applied to the reader's own life in such a way that the reader feels a connection with the fairy. The picture was a great addition as well. You have done a nice job describing her feelings as well as the feelings of many who may be reading.
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deathbyfrootloopsxx
Thank you so much for your comments. I am very glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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i think everyone wonders the same thing once in a while Nice write good luck ~S
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airhead247
Thank you so much for your comments. They are appreciated.
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aww... that's so sweet and so sad! i LOVE faeries! in so few lines you did capture the dillemma and fear and doubt! works very well with the image! thanks and good luck! *smiles*
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Thank you RhiannonMari
Your comments and kind words are definitely appreciated.
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I love that questioning are we real or are we not what an intrigue to ponder you hit this right on the mark awesome write best of luck in the contest
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Thank You Marc3012
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. Your kind comments are greatly appreciated.
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Thank you so much for your kind words CrazyWomanimal. I am glad that you enjoyed it.
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schniffles so very cleverly written I am ever so impressed fabulous job x
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Thank you for your comments I-Like-Rhymes. Thank you for hosting this contest.
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An interesting twist here. The usual everybody else is a figment of my imagination stood on its head.
Good idea, well handled.
Thanks for resurrecting this for my competition.
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Thank you for your comments Serenahind. They were appreciated.
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Awwww poor little fairy. I believe in fairies claps her hands I love fairies.
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Thank you so much for your comments Your Messiah. Your kkind words give me encouragement to continue writing.
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Awww. This makes the picture seem frantic and desperate; sheds new light on a different perspective. Well done.
-Cory
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Thank you so much for your comments -ButterflyCuts-. Your kind words are greatly appreciated.
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I love this.. the lines:
Would I be able to feel this pain
If I wasn't real?
They are beautfiul.. i love it. Thanks a lot.
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