Chew on the words I spit at you,
Dance to the songs I sing.
Swallow every kiss I throw at you,
Bury me under your skin.
Mask your shadow so it's just like mine,
Taste the liquor I drink.
Lick the poison off my lips,
Think the way I think.
Scratch my back I won't scratch yours,
I'll laugh at what you see.
Imperfection and painted smiles,
And you want to be like me...
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Written July 2nd, 2006
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This is one of those pieces that makes me want to memorize it, so I can say it to people, and then laugh maniacally...
It brought to mind a certain strip from the Johnny the Homicidal Maniac comics...that's awesome, Johnny is the most amazing thing ever...kudos to you.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
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That is fucking amazing! Xx.
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wow!
that's awesome!
i'm listening to soil - yellow lines.. am awesome song!
but for some reason i sort of sung that poem in the tune and my miserable attempt at the voice of slipknot - duality!
haha! that songs awesome! just like that poem.
oh and by the way!
i love your name 'pureamethyst'.. amethyst is my fave crystal thing.. *deep comments to leave you bewildered for days*
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Thankyou Rach
<3 xxxx
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wooooo.... this is the best you've ever done IMHO. Totally unforced rhyme (always gets brownie points in my book) and succinct and economical - not a redundant word in sight. Really love it Nat.
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