Marvellous
Angel to watch over me
Respectful to others
Excellent mother
Talented in many ways
Awesome
That's Mareta....my mum.
My mum is the most special person in my life. She has been there for me through the good times and the bad. She has looked after me when I am sick and when I am scared. I love my mum very, very much and I don't know what I would do without her in my life. My mum is there when I have a concert, she is there for everything I do and supports me the whole way through! Thank-you mum for everything you have done for me, I really appreciate it! Love you heaps....
From Paige xxxx
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Written July 2nd, 2006
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Hey Paige, you are a special person and a hardworking one too. I am from the Caribbean and i miss my mom. I now live in Canada. I wish you all the best, and keep up the good work.
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good work
Paige - you are a very nice and loving young lady - traits which I hope you keep for the rest of your life which, by my prediction, will be a very successful one. I will dedicate a poem just for you. Your (real-life) Grandmother. XX -
Had to stop by and applaud your work again, thank-you Paige
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Paige,
your acrostic for your mother is wonderful, it is true from what I know, and shows your love all the way through, it seems you are lucky to have each other. -
very lovely paige great love for your mom wonderful job
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hello there everyone thank-you so much for your kind words and reading my poetry... i will go read your poems as soon as i can thanx luv ya all from princess paige xoxoxox
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so sweet
HI paige
Firs I would like to praise you on wwriting such a sweet poem And secondly I would like to thank you for your comment on under the sun!
Keep on writing
kchanski -
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that is really, really sweet of you to do that for your mum. There are not that many mother daughter poetry duos and hopefully that makes you all even closer, -
how sweet!
wow! how nice of you to write a poem about your mom! lots of kids stop connecting with their moms at age ten, and i'm eleven in three days
i love the acrostic at the beggining. i think you handle acrostics really well! i hope to see a lot more of your work. keep it up! if you could look at some of my poems too that would be great. thanks!
best wishes,
lise
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Aww this is so sweet and nice Your mom must love it I like the little acrostic at the start where you spelled out her name down the side I think you did that really well And all the words you use in this poem are lovely and heartfelt Great job
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Awe, Paige this poem was postively sweet. Sounds like your mom is a very special person in your life. Great write, and keep it up!
Isabel
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It is so refreshing to see that such a lovely child truly loves and respects her mum and family on the whole. This day and age there are far to many disrespectful kids running wild because their parents don't really care either. Keep penning sweetheart.
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Thank-you Paige, sniff sniff, that was a beautiful poem and thank-you for all the kind words you said about me...
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Paige, this is a wonderful expression of your deep love for your mom.Your mom will always be your best friend sweetie.
And I can see that your respect for the things she has done for you through your young life has given you a strong begining.
Thank you for sharing your devotion
God Bless
Libra
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