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An Exchanged Remedy

See, we're two very different people
Yet blood has us conjoined
Destiny has made its call
Now this miracle has kept you sane
Entangled in a senile family
You still stayed on the train tracks

After many years we've made memories
Not all quite in the norm
Needed laughs straight from our past

Likely not all has been touched on
Inside the simple message lies
Never leave my side, Sydney
Every moment of your presence
Saves another minute of my life

Author notes

An acrostic for my Syd.
<3
Written July 2nd, 2006

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  • pozo
    July 3, 2006
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    Great piece which I liked a lot Keep writing, this was a lovely tribute acrostic to your cousin, Sydney
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • YesterdaysFeelings
    July 3, 2006
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    Cute. You're still a bumhole . Warped Tour is tomorrow. Are you just pooping your pants or what?!