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untittled...

you said you did, but you don't

you said you would, but you won't

you said I love, but you hate

you said you'd come, but you're late



I say I do, but I don't

I say I will, but I won't

I say I love, but I hate

I say I'll show, but I ain't!

Author notes

yeah...i'm not really sure wheere this one is coming from, but anyway...I oculdn't think up a tittle so yeah...if anyone does...could you please let me kno???? thanks a bunch...that woul dbe awesome!! lol <3
Written July 1st, 2006

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  • Blinde Liebe
    July 10, 2006
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    awwe! thank you sweeetie!!! so, what have you been doing??? Casey


  • July 9, 2006
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    i like this poem very good just keep up the good work and love you mommy bye xoxoxoxoxox