This sweet,peaceful dream
Of seeing your spirit now
Lies within heaven.
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In Honor of Kali Romds.
Died June 15th in a car crash by a drunk driver.
My only friend,now in heaven.
Author notes
In Honor of my only friend,who moved to Alaska.her mom called me(We gave each other our phone numbers)and told me about it.
Written July 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- Ages 12 & Under ONLY - Dreams and Wishes by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended July 21, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have roven that one need not write many lines to make a powerful point to those who read it. Your piece is short and sweet and so sad. I am sorry about the loss of your friend, but know you have done a Wonderful Job!
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Wow, such small poem but so powerful. Very cleverly written. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautifully done. Sad for sure, but lovely.
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From what her mom told me...yeah,but i still don't know WHY he got off the hook!
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yeah....we were friends forever...What pissed me off was that the drunk driver surived...and also got off the hook somehow
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