To the good Lord up above
We thank you now for this grub
Gratitude we'll surely show
As we chow down nice and slow
Blessing's said, and candle's lit
But in our food, please don't spit
Author notes
Written July 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Mealtime Prayers by Sharcu.
300 points, ended July 7, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for commenting, appreciate it.
Storm -
Short and sweet! Although I guess most of the entries into this contest are like that. I like the rhyming between above and grub. Thanks for entering the contest...
--Tim -
Haha, nice prayer, it was really funny! In the second line, the rhythm was a bit odd... (Maybe personal opinion?) Good luck in the contest!
LittleAnn
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