It was a night
that this old soul
would not soon forget
in a battle zone
so far from home
a true moment of bliss
She walked across the floor
and ask me to dance
A sexy little red head
I just bowed and then said yes
It was a moment
this battled heart
would not forget
When I journeyed home
And was happy once again
Author notes
I had a good time the other night the first good time in a long time, Unfortunately the red head was half my age and it was only a dance or two but I still had a great time
Written July 1st, 2006
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i am so glad to read you are having fun and taking time for yourself. your poem reads like the dance you describe; lingers on forever etched in one's heart. a lovely poem of happiness and it is a joy to read~
lynn
p.s. your author's comments made me smile too~
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Fun is where you can find it, and I bet this little lady enjoyed it as much as you did. I'm glad you had some reliefe from the conditions in which your in at the moment. You deserve it
This is a nice poem, beautifully written, and gives us a little bit of yourself.
A very nice write
Dee
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I am glad to hear that you still were able to have some fun, which is important once in a while. Take Care, and stay safe while you are there, my friend.
Nyetta
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i'ts nice to hear that you can still have fun... good job.
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Very Good, Charles! What time was it when she approached you?...a quarter to two?...I'm kidding! They all look good at a quarter to two!...Bon Ton Ron
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WONDERFUL POEM
Ah Charlie, Age does not matter when we are having fun. I am sure she had a wonderful time too with you.You always bring a smile with you to share. Thank you for that. Take care my friend. Blessings to you, stay safe. Sandy 
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