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Hazel Eyes

Hazel Eyes

Hazel eyes confuse me so
They’re green, they’re brown who really knows
Is it mood or dress that change the shade
I hope I never see your lows

Can I trust the beauty that I see
That sea of green that’s in my dreams
Is it her bedroom eyes I seek
I may never know or so it seems

Author notes

I found out my brown eyed girl had Hazel eyes,  THis is a poem I wrote for the internet, but found it suiting for this occasion.  HAd to add another verse those changing eyes so full of lust.
Written July 1st, 2006

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  • Foxydaze14
    July 2, 2006
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    This is a sweet poem. Very cute! I always thought my eyes were brown and now they are turning kind of hazel, lol. Keep up the great work!

  • dont-4-get- duckie
    July 2, 2006
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    this is so sweet, (yes her eyes are hazel)... he he. it has good rhymes


  • Bon Ton Ron
    July 1, 2006
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    very nice, Charles! I like this too...My eyes are turning blue with envy....wish I'd written that one!....Bon Ton Ron

  • June-bug
    July 1, 2006
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    Great poem I really enjoyed reading it..


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 1, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Ah very sweet Charlie. It does not matter the color as long as she only has eyes for you. Excellent warm hearted write. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Be safe my friend. Green eyes smiling in the rain, I love that song. Sandy Hugs and smiles.
    Edited on Jul 01, 8:42 because ''.


  • tawk gold member
    July 1, 2006
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    excellent write

    Wow I love it although I have deep blue eyes that turn to green when I am upset. But I just love this poem. The flow and rhyme was excellent, Keep up the wonderful work!!

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