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Helplessly Helping you

What Happened?
We have reached the winter
Of our Friendship
A time of death
Shall we survive?
And flourish the following spring
Or will this dormancy continue
To an icy funeral
I wish it not
But you suppress me
As I water you
And wish you to flourish
But you lock me up
In a dark and dank prison cell
You barred up my mind
Covered my voice
And I am repressed
Crushed and overpowered
Stifled and smothered
I am helpless
As I help you

Author notes

my best friend of 10 years my sister BNB what are we going to do? when I care for you and your mind is blocked to my pain. I love you but i can't help you with this I cannot help you forever I am growing weak....

BNB she inspires me . . .
Written July 1st, 2006

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  • sad1976
    July 3, 2006
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    Good luck in my contest and thanks for entering.