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under this plastic sheet

when can i breathe again
just one more breath
to fill theses starving lungs
make me feel alive again
like its possible
to keep going on

when can i breathe again
stop drowning in these problems
these pointless silly problems
which come in the form of a rope
tingled around my neck
...chocking me

when can i breathe again
come out from under
this  clear plastic sheet
that lets me watch the world go by
while I'm strangling underneath
in my shameful world of anger

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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Childofserenity
    July 3, 2006
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    creative.... like everything fits together