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Let's feast

Fork, knife, spoon
Dinner's coming soon
A piece of this a scoop of that
Stuff your face and try to chat
Thanks for the company
No where else I'd rather be
Let's feast

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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Vera Rich
    July 7, 2006
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    Let us feast indeed... I remember a very dear friend, a Bishop - who in the custom of his country of origin(Belarus) would bless the food and drink before a feast... and then would laugh and say...

    "So, it is all blessed... So let us eat and drink... and the more we eat and drink, the more blessings we shall get!"

    Bon appetit!


  • Sharcu silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    I'm not really sure if this qualifies as a prayer. I liked the rhyming, but the only part about it I see as a prayer is the thanks for the company part. Sorry Thanks for entering anyways...
    --Tim