Calm and serene
she waits to begin her tease
Him, powerful in his glory
is pulsating and strong
She begins her flow of temptation
releasing a musk scent
that entices
Her sweet spot, swollen,
He's throbbing and wet
With juices mixing
they engage in the dance
of satisfaction
in the port of pleasure
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Written June 30th, 2006
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Port of pleasure..You have some imagingation for your secret hidden garden of delight..i liie the anticaption
she begisn slowly.....until
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Darling
More, more I implore
your flower he adores
trembles just waiting for
his delicate touch explore.
Janet -
A well written piece of erotica,it is tasteful,sensual and like good erotica it leaves more to the imagination by letting the reader feel the passion rather than graphically portraying it.Especially liked the phrase"port of pleasure"it is different,unique and apt.Well done indeed,good luck in the contest,love and light,Yvette
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wow. Ok I need a man wow wo wo Very erotic.
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oy!
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Thank you NurseChilly...
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Ahh thankyou for entering our contest with such a "sweet" pressed flower...
a nice short concise write..
well done and good luck in the contest -
SHIMMER ME TIMBERS - a port of pleasure, inde
A PORT OF PLEASURE, indeed - so sensual, wet, and sweet which is one of my favorite things!
That last stanza was HOT, HOT, HOT and passed this old fellows VIAGRA FREE hardness test! I can TRULY see that you are a very SOULFUL WOMAN, indeed! I'm SO GLAD that i clicked on this one today and IF you ar a lover of erotica invite you to take a look at some of mine or to send me an IM and I'll direct you to a few of them! Is it hot on here -or am I coming down wioth something? GOOD LUCK in the contest!The background and the colors you used to present this piece only added to its sexiness!
Peace & Love!
Earl. -
Oh, dear me, that was not paced at all..that was pure hot-to-trot!!!!
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I thought it was a change of pace for me...LOL
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Oh geez, oh geez...now you've gone and blown the myth that ...well, you know...we are , errm, retiring. LOLOLOL.
god woman, you got it good! -
This is a very sexy write and the imagery is very vivid.
Her sweet spot, swollen,
He's throbbing and wet
With juices mixing
they engage in the dance
of satisfaction
in the port of pleasure
Those lines are very vivid imagery. -
gotta go find my husband... sexy poem!
Write on!
Kimberly G. -
Thank you...Almost had to take a cold shower after writing it..LOL
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A most excellent and sexy write! You go, girl!
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