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My Last Tear

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My heart overflows with love for you
My body aches for your touch
I open my mouth, nothing comes out
Words are so meaningless now

You leave in the morning
Life will stand still for me
rewinding every memory captured
in my mind of our time together

Alone, as if "WE" never existed
feeling empty, hollow, devastated
with nothing left but
my last tear


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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Knight70
    July 12, 2007

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    You captured the photo so well.

    Alone, as if "WE" never existed
    feeling empty, hollow, devastated
    with nothing left but
    my last tear


    I just adore this last stanza. I can feel the devastating emotion in every word. Sometimes, love does hurt.

  • Puppydog gold member
    July 3, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM!

    Yes, sometimes there is nothing left but the tears.

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    This is heavy with aloneness of One. My, my, my friend, you are a magical master with words. You pour that sould out there and it vibrates with emtion.

  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 1, 2006
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    excellent presentation

    I know this feeling very well. The emptiness, the devastation is all so difficult to get through. Your words express these emotions so well.

    "Alone, as if "WE" never existed
    feeling empty, hollow, devastated"

    Powerful write. Best of luck in the contest.

    Ethereal Melody



  • DrmGrl
    July 1, 2006
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    I've been stuck in this moment for oh so long, wondering if this tear is really the last, and it never is...Beautiful poetry Love. Thankx for sharing!!!

  • master-of-shadow
    July 1, 2006
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    This piece is very well written, conveys its content very well to the reader and links in very well with the picture you wrote it from

  • Miss Bue Laces
    July 1, 2006
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    Well done!! I love this write. Thank you very much for this entry.
    Good luck in the contest.
    </3
    kisses_x
  • ememem7
    July 1, 2006
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    RIGHT..ON..POINT. EXACTLy where im at...mayb one day ill be able to say i cried my last tear..but until then my cup runneth over...thanx for sharing
  • Puppydog gold member
    July 1, 2006
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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM

    I know this feeling oh so well, your words are beautiful indeed.

  • Heavenly Angel
    June 30, 2006
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    Wonderfully beautiful, my friend! Poignant and tender piece! I wish you all the best!

  • Cherokee
    June 30, 2006
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    "with nothing left but this last tear" That is beautiful poetry. I enjoyed every line of every stanza. Beautiful!

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    Thank you Shaina Bird. The picture inspired me.
    Noreen

  • BeautifulBirdie
    June 30, 2006
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    This poem is beautiful. I love it! I really touched my heart. I can relate to this one. I have felt this many times. Love is tough, but like the saying goes "It's better to have loved, than to have never loved at all." And oh man is that the truth.
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