Recent renovations are receptive
to rambling rednecks recklessly
repeating random rituals that
reference their rhetorical rights.
Reasonable restitution is required
as recollection reveals ramifications
regarding the repulsive roast
this reprehensible rodent recites.
Rehabilitation for the rapacious rebel
requires ruthless retaliation
resulting in reducing reverberation
to only reviewable rapturous rites.
Rhon's rathskeller renders righteous
redemption to all rambling rednecks.
Author notes
Written June 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- Complexity Exchanges by 2lullabyhaven.
700 points, ended September 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Alliteration Galore. Bring it. by lechap.
380 points, ended September 30, 2008, 21 entries
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great entry. You have a strong control of R. I loved the fast paced rhythm and I really liked the ending. Keep pennin.
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Really? hahaha thanks for this piece you have shared in my contest, wishing you luck lol
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Thank you for kind comments! This was fun to write and a great exercise for expanding my vocabulary. Thanks again!
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Really radiant and remarkable
Right on!!! Magnificient and really well done. I am now in such a quandy as how to judge this contest. Guess the challenge lies with me. Have decided to get some help in judging this contest from Mecury Rising, as there are just so many incredibly writes, all amazing and oh my, oh my so difficult to choose between. This too is just such an outstanding write. Well done and good luck in the contest. Marilyn
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