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Messy Mind

Let go, stay together
Make it fade, rub it in
Smell the lust, and miss it
Stop understanding but want to
Let it hurt
Do something irrational
Then regret it
Let that pain you even more
Cry and scream
Say no, then say yes, then say no again
Do it over and over until this lesson you still haven't learned
Try to understand
But you won't
Give in, give out
Feel all that pain but don't except it
Tell yourself it's not over
Then know it has too
Hate yourself
Then realize you can't or you'll never survive

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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Elenore
    June 30, 2006
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    Thank you.


  • plzdiefasterlove
    June 30, 2006
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    WOW this was filled with emotion.i loved it.thanx for entering in the contest and good luck