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Dear God

Please God, bless this food
Let it go down nice and chewed.
Don't let Suzie be a hog
And me secretly feed the dog.

Oh, God I almost forgot
Please help me not get caught!

AMEN!

Author notes

I had so much fun writting the first one, I had to try again!  I think that honestly everyone could relate somewhere to this
Written June 30th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Dark Reaper
    August 3, 2006
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    amazing

    This is a great prayer, funny but sweet. You sound like one of my friends, you have it easy going and a great family (lucky haha) but this is a amazing poem and away from the dark side of poetry im usually used to so it is a nice change. Ish gonna read more so prepare yourself have an ausome time

    TK


  • 0darkAngel0
    July 25, 2006
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    this is nice.
    i liked your prayer
    good luck

  • Vera Rich
    July 7, 2006
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    This competition seems to be producing a lot of splendid "family" pieces... and this is another one!

    I am finding it most enjoyable...


  • PoEtS-bLeEd-InK
    July 6, 2006
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    I love this...and it would work for me alomost perfectly because we are not allowed to feed my best friends dog because he isn't supposed to beg, but we do anyways, but we always seem to get caught...and My brother is the bigggest hog of the best food, or he always takes stuff off my lpate instead of going and getting his own...lol...but good poem, i can relate...lolgood job...and I wish you luck in the contest


  • LittleAnn
    July 5, 2006
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    I like this one as well... I enjoyed reading this and could imagine a young child mumbling this... Good luck with this entry also!
    LittleAnn
    Edited on Jul 05 because 'typo'.

  • Mickie27
    July 2, 2006
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    I loved this it was really fun to read and I enjoyed reading it. I hope that all is well with you and sorry I haven't been in touch for ages. It is great to see you still writing wonderful verses that please God too. A very light hearted and fun poem.

  • lillmissunshine
    July 1, 2006
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    Hey Chelsea this is great it is very short, but it sounds like what a little boy around 4 would pray good luck in this contest
    Your sister
    Kimberly


  • Sharcu silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    Suprisingly I don't know anyone named Suzie But I could imagine you saying this as a prayer before a meal time. Wonderful job at writing another one, Chelsea! Thanks for entering again
    --Tim

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