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Never Know

Trust is what I'll never give
Comfort is what's uncomfortable
Letting in is letting go
It's me I'll never let you know

Stories with alarming substance
Truth I wish were lies
I'm sure you'd try to empathize
Confidence tainted with fear
It's me you'll never know, my dear

Secrets that I want to tell
Talents I don't possess
Power given to the weak
My dark secrets are what you seek
Travels made and what I've seen
It's knowing me that is obscene

It's me that I don't know

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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • ToTheMoonAndBack
    June 30, 2006
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    great job, you did a good job on expressing the way people dont know you and you dont know your self ( or thats what i got from this)thanks for entering and GOODLUCK
    Delicate<3