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Feed my mind

Come speak with me my love,
tell me of the things you see
in the imagination of your mind
allow your thoughts to unwind
Recite poetry of the pleasant kind
open these eyes for me

Show me budding apple blossom
Where bees find pollen to devour
lead me through the fragrant bower
to feel a drizzling April shower
I want to see your world

Let us walk along the hidden path
to hear the sweet smelling babbling stream
Paint me pictures of which I dream
And blend colours that have gone unseen
Share these wonders with me  

Tell me when the night intrudes
when stars like diamonds
dance around the moon
and we are together
so in tune
I love you darling… I do

When we retire to our bed tonight
and your eyes close just like mine
I thank the spirits so divine
for allowing our hearts
to be entwined
and my love for you perfectly sublime
All tomorrows are you and I



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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Truthful Princess
    July 11, 2006
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    beautiful

    Wow this was such a cute poem..who was it about? Your love? Hehe! Hope so! It was a really nice poem that I truelly enjoyed reading!Your poems are so pretty! **dances around like a lil girl**

  • Libra
    June 30, 2006
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    Thank you andezia this was very nice...much appreciated

  • Libra
    June 30, 2006
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    My dearest friend, you have always been so supportive and I would not have had the opportunity to write my poetry if you had not introduced me to AP and given me courage to write.
    You are one special person to me Penquin ...love ya


  • andezia
    June 30, 2006
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    You captured the true meaning of love, well done!


  • June 30, 2006
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    Zeal

    How wonderfully imaginitive the picture you paint here dear Barb. This is quite a testimonial to you in your ability as a poet and also your deeper feelings of Love. You have created a so wonderful feeling of a deeper yearning that is very captivating. You are a remarkable women dear lady. Larry

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