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life

Life is a sea wave  roaring at us
Or at times its quiet and calm.
There are trials, difficulties and more
Sailing through obstacles till you reach the shore.
Its not a bed of roses they say,
At times the sun's shining bright
Or sometimes it snows, whats next who knows?
Our part we are to play,
In this play directed by God.
We can grope in the dark
Or derive joy from the tiny spark
And enlighten our lives with a ray of hope.
Sorrow and depression should not stay
Its up to us- to live dying or to die living
Enjoy every moment- life's a blessing, a boon
Be positive in outlook and dance to God's tune
Open the windows, feel the fresh air!!!


 





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Written June 30th, 2006

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  • Sudarshan
    July 13, 2006
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    Awesome

    Hi Sanya, you wrote in your introduction that you are just a beginner, heck who says it ??? You look very much a pro, this is a wonderfully written poem. Optimism and positive thinking is the only way to life and success and your poem oozes with these qualities. I am really glad to be in the company of such an optimistic thinker. Like Vic earlier said, there are no forced rhymes, just pure free flowing words straight from the heart, such thoughts are really pleasing and worth reading. Your poem would give hope and inspiration to the people who are down and out. Keep up the great work, have a good time.


  • eternalpoet
    June 30, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    Hello Sanya...Pehchan Kaun??

    It has been more than 6 months since you have posted anything, lol and i thought only i was among those who have stopped posting regularly

    anyways.. now i hope that you are back on AP.. you have been missed .. ... about your poem, well i think its one of your best works, no forced rhymes, a write right from the heart, you just told what you wanted to tell a simplest convenient way.. ... i hope atleast you keep on write, posing doesnt always matters

    anyways..take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up .. your humble little friend.. ... .. .. - vic ( who else ?)

    P.S :- Welcome Back !!

  • mina nagi
    June 30, 2006
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    Aaaaw.... this absolutely gorgeous piece... I'm glad I read it... I'm going through a terrible phase of my life...I should follow these lines... please pray for me... where have you been? Nice to see you back...

    Be positive in outlook and dance to God's tune
    Open the windows, feel the fresh air!!!

    mina


  • Forms of Me
    June 30, 2006
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    This is a very hopeful writing.
    I like the words you have chosen to pen this well crafted write. There are also some nice images within the flow which I feel enhances this a lot.

    I like this line the best...
    "Be positive in outlook and dance to God's tune"

    Dancing to God's tune is the best way to dance!


    I am thankful that I come by and read this nicely penned work of poetry.

    Keep up the great work…..
    LIZ

  • Alexei
    June 30, 2006
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    Hi, i think you really pionted out the good and bad of life. i think that the word "Or" that you used quite freuqnelty in your poem examplify the sudden turnovers (or mood swings) of life. At one piont life can so beutiful but the next minute everything can change or vice versa.
    Good!!

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