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Living Hell

I was living in this hell
They just scream and f*#king yell
Can you see this is my hell, you could never tell
I was living in this hell

Get away from.....
Get away from.....
Get away from...... THIS HELL

I was living in my hell
You'll never scream and yell
You'll take me from my nightmare
I'll thank you when we're out of here

Get away from.....
Get away from.....
Get away from...... USSSSSSSSS

I'll never need to fear
They'll never get us here
But I'm still full of fear.... they'll never get me here
I'm never full of fear
I'll never need to fear
You'll be here

You got me out of there
You'll be there......

Author notes

If you have been there you'll know what I'm writing about and if your there get out before it's too late and don't say you can't
I know your thinking just another cry baby but I've been there I was lucky enough to have my brothers and my mum but everyone has someone or something to hold on to..... i'v seen so much in my short life so far i'v seen people with no one to save them but them selves its sad seeing foul human nature rip us all apart
Written June 30th, 2006

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  • master-of-shadow
    June 30, 2006
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    This is very well written, has a powerful message which is fairly well conveyed to the reader. You manage to express much within this piece, I especially like the sense of hope near the end.
    Very well written