Dancing in the wind
Its cycloptic double stare
Awing fearful eyes.
Passion on the dying breeze
Silence stills the open eye.
The storm rages once again.
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Written June 29th, 2006
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Thanks for the comment! The reason the poem is short is that it is a form poem called a tanka, like a haiku but wuth two additional lines of seven.
Thanks for reading!
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Nice write. It's a little too short, i think you should add more to it. I like the last line: the storm rages once again
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