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Le chant de la félicité


Le regard se retourne sur lui-même
Le regardeur disparaît dans le Soi
Rien ne reste hormis le Soi lui-même

Quel ravissement que le son du vide
Quelle paix que le parfum de l'un
Quelle grâce que la lumière du rien

La félicité allège chacun
La félicité n'appartient à rien
La félicité et je sont un


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Written June 29th, 2006

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  • thia
    April 2, 2008

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    Quel ravissement que le son du vide
    Quelle paix que le parfum de l'un
    Quelle grâce que la lumière du rien

    J'ai adoré cete strophe...
    nice!!


  • jean-marc
    June 30, 2006
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    thank you, rod, for your comment. yes, 6 months are short for learning this not so easy language. but you have here the same in english : allpoetry.com/Poem/2064449
    with kindest wishes.


  • MyrddinEmrys silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    Oh, how I wish I had studied French for more than a single semester in college! The Song of Happiness? I sense peace and joy here despite not knowing the words.

    Peace and blessings, Rod