Upon the Picasso's brush
Polish by my magical touch
A face painted on Shakespeare's words
Half Mona Lisa's and half mine
It is known to reunite a world
A world that is destroying in the name of humans kind
In the state in which I ponder
I discover the world's only wonder
In a field of bumble bees, lies a butterfly
Soaring life carefree and peacefully
Like an eagle in the evening sky
I travel life distance's faithfully
As I exhale anew, I inhale in relief
I raise up my cup, my fate, my belief
In the name of the Holy; I drink up upon thee
Cleanse my spirit and help me find the terminal
Let me be part of something greater than me
The tree of life, the vine, the one that is eternal
Author notes
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A contest entry
- ALMOST Anything and Everything! Win Memberships! by kiwikrazi37.
369 points, ended August 14, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All about Imagery! by Lady Michaella.
315 points, ended July 4, 2008, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme, it was penned well
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Well done, I really enjoyed reading this poem. A very powerful poem to. I love the reference to great painters and writers and great use of imagery. Thanks for entering!
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Let me be part of something greater than me
The tree of life, the vine, the one that is eternal
I liked these lines a lot this was really good! -
ooooh! This is really good! I really like the references to shakespeare and picasso. I really like your wording, it made it really poetic. Good job, I loved it!
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This is very good. Great choice of words and vocabulary! I like the topic. Thanks for your entry, best wishes in the contest.
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How interesting. This was such a unique poem, thankfully! After all the...alledged...poetry I have been reading of late, this was refreshing.
"In the state in which I ponder
I discover the world's only wonder
In a field of bumble bees, lies a butterfly
Soaring life carefree and peacefully
Like an eagle in the evening sky
I travel life distance's faithfully"
Very soothing.
Well done and thanks for entering!
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Great job, I loved the vivid imagery, and the message you conveyed in your poem. Thank you very much for entering my contest
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First let me say this is lovely. But I do have one question, is it supposed to 'bumble bee' instead of 'bubble bee'? but other than that this is really good! best of luck in the contest.
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A strong piece with lots of imagery and good diction. The poem had a good sense of depth to it and that helped make the message shine. Thank you for this entry.
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awesome awesome awesome. i thought that your ryhme in this one was great. plus, i found this piece thought provoking and definitely original. good imagery as well. i liked the meaning that you pulled together at the end...very special. wonderfully done. rock on.
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Hi, loved it, I always look forward to reading something posted by you and again you did not let the reader down, a very nice write with a very good feel, all the best my friend, loved it, hugs Di, you have my applause.
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This is wonderful. Well written and so true. Humanities fate rest in your hands and many more like you. I am truely amazed at the people your age writing such powerful messages in your poetry. You will be a part of something greater than you. Your time will come. Bless you and your future!
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a smiling piece, where there is hope in the heart smiles can be found in life spill poetic ink and twist me, turn me into the wild lemony crazy shape of unfathomable love...
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