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Paraphernalia



 

Faithfulness is hard,
As loneliness screams boredom,
And scrolled numbers open doors
To a candy store.

 

Mouth curls sweet lies
To enthusiastic ears
And play things;  toys…
Shall I,  shan’t I?

 

Body quivers,
Flesh, lush and moist,
Shimmers a tease as
Fluttered lashes flash empty promises.

And devotion lasts just long enough,
For a dammed good fuck,
Without the paraphernalia of love.



sarajane

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Written June 29th, 2006

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  • Tercarro
    February 16, 2007
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    Now that's good

    Devotion lasts just long enough
    for a dammed good fuck
    without the paraphernalia of love

    Your a writer who makes fluid flow even in areas that have been dry for years. I would call you a diviner.


  • lovelustre
    November 4, 2006
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    brilliant!

    Wow!

  • Bad Bill
    July 24, 2006
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    Excellent

    Literate, clever and amusing--in short, a damned good poem!

    Cheers,
    Bill


  • DesolatELifE
    July 22, 2006
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    lol, that last verse made me laugh
    that's good, and i like tyhe colour of the font
    good luck, thanks for entering.


  • James L Williams
    July 16, 2006
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    awesome stuff. The last line makes the poem in my mind.....lol. Great write. And again Good Luck!!!!!

    Luke


  • MissStranger
    July 13, 2006
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    Each of your poems is a shiver of art!!!


  • Summer Dawn
    July 10, 2006
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    awesome write.


  • leo2
    July 1, 2006
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    I never had one that I didn't like..lol. The subtlety but not the sensuality was shattered in those last two lines. Thanks for the smiles this morning.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • greyhaime
    June 30, 2006
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    now that says it all!

    blessings-
    Krystal


  • annamoy
    June 30, 2006
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    How true, as you get older the last verse of your poem is all you really want!! Well done on this.

    Ann


  • Floorboards
    June 30, 2006
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    heehee,excellent write my friend!


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 30, 2006
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    Even better the second time around!

    As promised and I must say the pleasure was all mine (LOL!!) I've come back to give you the hand that you deserve for this snesual poem which was even better like a good woman the second time around!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • captain splat
    June 30, 2006
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    Damn, lost my load..

    Well shiver me timbers, my plank's gone stiff, you really have pushed the boat out on this one and I bet that would leave a salty taste in your mouth!


  • StarEyes
    June 30, 2006
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    This is really well done. it has a soft, gentle touch to it. like cuddleing up with someone you love! i love it.


  • shuggie
    June 30, 2006
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    Sarajane! you are so bad hee hee I was flowing in the poetic sreams of bliss then whack you have such a tentitive way of expressing stuff lol I think this is a great piece have you ever saw or eaten one of those bubble gum lollipops ? cause it's not how good the center is for blowing bubbles it's how the outside tases first,init ?,you are a very talented girl and I love your ways.Shug


  • sarajaneUK
    June 30, 2006
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    Earl...we really need to get you sorted! I think you just get worse and worse!

  • the chase
    June 29, 2006
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    lmao.


  • Toni A Christman
    June 29, 2006
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    This is just incredible, Jan! Aside from the fact that I agree with you wholeheartedly, the way you put this together and plopped that nasty little ending in it is quite the perfect gouge. I have a friend who says it doesn't matter if the ice cream is vanilla. All ice cream is damned good! LOL... Best, Toni


  • individuality gold member
    June 29, 2006
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    hehehe yeah i say, and why not, a damned good fuck is exactly that - damned good spill poetic ink and twist me, turn me into the wild lemony crazy shape of unfathomable love...

  • Swtpoetryman
    June 29, 2006
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    IT PASSED ME HARDNESS TEST - HANDS DOWN!

    For a damned good fuck, indeed!

    You know where to find me, Baby - when me toodle gets a little better! He! He! OH, Boy - that last stanza says it all! And every big girl and boy needs their juicy toys, Sweet Heart! This one is more than worthy of a STANDING O, O, O, O, O and passed me hardness test - hands down (you know where)! since I am sadly out of applause and my hands were occupied elsewhere anyway I'll come back tomorrow for a second read and to give you a hand - I mean leave you a hand! LOL!!!!!
    Peace & Love, Sweet Sara Jane!
    Earl.

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