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Hope for Sharcu (Cinquain)

© Bob Barra, 6-29-06

Sharcu,
Down with no hope;
At least the hope’s unseen;
Look to that implanted light, friend;
He’s there;

Reach out,
Through reaching in;
In solitude, seek Him;
Clutch the dear truth you know so well;
Abide;

Embrace
Your King on high;
Grab the grace you need now;
Stand on His firm peace given you;
Comfort;

You’ll find
All He has to
Give you, with great mercy;
That He’s not changed, as His glory’s
Here, now!

Author notes

Hang in there, li'l brother!

You're dearly loved!
Written June 29th, 2006

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  • M0ofi3
    July 11, 2006
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    Thanks! It's God.

    God bless...


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    July 11, 2006
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    Congradulations on a great poem and your win....you earned it!!!


  • M0ofi3
    July 11, 2006
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    Awesome? Hmmm...I can think of two things more awesome, far more awesome. One is the Lord, who is responsible for this.

    The other is who this poem is for.

    Thanks, FireyAura. Even if I hadn't won the gold for this. You're a winner to have produced the contest for our brother.

    God bless you!

    Hmmm...you already are!


  • FireyAura
    July 11, 2006
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    Wow, this poem was really awesome! I loved the form you used. I honestly felt like this was really comforting. We do need to turn to God in times of troubles and I loved how you prestented it. Thanks for entering, and congrats on the gold!
    ~*Chelsea*~


  • Sharcu silver member
    June 29, 2006
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    It seems you have been in quite the encouraging mood lately since I've seen several poems you've written for others But I greatly appreciate this one, bro. I love how you've started writing poetry in different forms... really makes you seem like a "better poet" (if that is at all possible). Plus since this poem is for me, I love it all the more. Thank you so much God bless....
    --Tim

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