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I Smell HUMAN

I Smell HUMAN!

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Written June 29th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    June 30, 2006
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    LOL... caught me off guard with just the one line and made me laugh! Cute. Kimberly G.

  • johnh94
    June 29, 2006
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    Very cute! perhaps more fitting would be, "I smell slop!", but, perhaps pigs think of us as slop anyway!


  • Huntress silver member
    June 29, 2006
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    I do wonder what a pig thinks about humans. They probably think we stink as bas as they do Very cute and original. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest