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Making Love (One Liner)

Making Love......

Remember that our true worth lies
within the love we make.

~ Becky - June 2006 ~

Not what you were expecting, is it?

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A one liner about making love happen in our lives.  Yes, it could also be about 'making love'; unconditional, beautiful and true love
Written June 29th, 2006

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  • future-unfathomable
    October 12, 2006
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    Oh Momma, you never cease to amaze!!!!! Wonderfully wicked insight! *huggles*


  • guruist
    September 16, 2006
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    This one line gives poetry its definitive power. I mean certainly it will spark a menagerie of comments. All on a different scheme and ideaology. I studied it before my comment and was able to explore several things. But the most profound would be just where did love orignate. God of course. Amd who else could create such a complicated entity and put it in such a small and delicate vessel as an emotion? Love is the ultimate reason for our existence now and continually. And to be able to love one another is an added bonus. Love is so powerful and wonderful we attribute it to other feelings that are nirvanna such as sex. You know making love. I only wish we could make love socially and spiritually as well. Thanx for the thoughts and poem. Terrell


  • Bullet To The Head
    July 25, 2006
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    nice...i like the one liner thing...its simple yet so inspiring and deep...it seems they can say more than the amout of words can tell.

    hope everything is doing well with you =]

    ♥ Lynn

  • temperance21
    July 7, 2006
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    So short, so true, so wonderful. You are very insightful. Hope to hear from you again soon.

    Love ya!
    Jill

  • Veronica Cross
    July 2, 2006
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    Thanks for your comment on "Making Love", Niecee Yes, this is so true, isn't it? I hope you, Russ and that new baby are doing well and that you are all settled in. Please do keep in touch, Hon.

    Tons of s

    ~ Becky ~


  • D-niecee
    July 1, 2006
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    Good

    Very true

  • Veronica Cross
    June 29, 2006
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    Thanks again for your lovely comment, my 'lil Princess Angel Actually, this was a line from my poem "Five". It's something I've said for a long time now And yes, I know the title is misleading...hehehe. I did that on purpose

    And yes, we can chat on Yahoo. I keep it closed most of the time so that I'm invisible. Just let me know on here when you'd like to chat and if I'm available, I'll IM you in I miss our chats, too

    Much love and many blessings

    Your Mommy Angel


  • d a f f o d i l
    June 29, 2006
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    i have to blush and say i expected erotic love...in a sensual way...i got something much more beautiful..this was stunning!

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