Uhm here I have a rose,
I cut it just for you.
It’s the same colour as my wrists,
I cut them for you too.
Uhm here a sad slow love song,
I sing to the night for you.
Played on guitar with bleeding fingers,
and bleeding hearts run through.
Uhm here are sheets of velvet,
The deepest darkest red.
My love for you, replaced my soul,
Which for better times has fled.
Uhm here a silver tear drop,
Innocent and pure.
I’m poisoned by my emotions,
And you’re the only cure.
Uhm here I have a token,
Accept it I beg you please.
Look, see how much I love you,
I fall down on my knees.
Uhm I hope you like my picture,
I drew it, it took a while.
Though it’s cut into my wrist,
It’s of your lovely smile?
Uhm here a silken knife,
Black as my dark abyss.
Bleeding bleeding slowly,
You’re the one I miss.
Uhm here a kiss by moonlight,
A moment just for you.
Silent like my screaming,
And dead lips, strangled blue.
So here I have a rose,
I cut it just for you.
It’s the same colour as my love,
Beaten purple, black and blue.
Author notes
eeemoooooooooo emo emo emo ^-^;;
i love verses one and eight. <3<3<3
okay context context context as a god once said, emo kid confessing his obsession to the one he loves, he is very nervous and keeps offering her emo gift after emo gift like a rose, a tear, some blood, an emo kiss... so sad *sniff* i luff my little emo kid
Written June 29th, 2006
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I don't think the god meant context in that way... He meant social, historical, geographical and political context.+
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your welcome
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is that a compliment or an insult!? and do you or do you not like this poem (: / (thats a confused face by the by kukuku)
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shall do thankyou ^-^
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Hey...you used my title again, I wish you'd credit me for that. >< Nah, just kidding, I don't wish to be affiliated with this poem at all. And I'm kidding again!
Not bad considering it's meant to be silly emo crap, it's actually quite a lot like your normal stuff so pretty good! -
It is too repetative. And you need to write whats going on in your author comments, so people know what your talking about
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okay imagine the scene, an emo kid has finaly pluked up the courage to tell the love of his life that he has a secret obsession with her, i'd be nervous too. the 'uhm' is just to emphasise how unconfident he is? is that good enough for you?did you find it too repetative?
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I have a question, what is with the "uhm"? But other than that, its a good write. Keep up the killer work
~ImmortalUndead~
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