Hold me tight
Never let me go
I want to be the one
And always know
Do you here the things I say
I wonder why I’ve never
Felt this way
I want to be with you
Forever, I hope we
Don’t fall though
The cracks in the floor
Of misery and anguish
There’s so much
Then we’ve ever seen
I’m just glad that
Through it all we both
Stayed clean
I hurt so bad inside
But from you I do
Not hide
There’s so much we
Haven’t yet been through
But there’s no one else
I see I only see you
And that’s how I want
It to be, forever just
You and me
Never let me go
I’ll never let you go
Take me home
Don’t let me drown
Cuz I don’t want
To die alone
Author notes
this was a piece I wrote when i was going out with DJKrystalight I think thats her page now.
Written June 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options Contest, (love) by Lady Eclipse.
300 points, ended October 12, 2006, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Love Me Tender~ by -Ink Artist-.
525 points, ended February 16, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest: AP boyfriend!! [Male only!!!] by -darkprincess-.
450 points, ended April 2, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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CONGRATULATIONS!!!
You won my contest!! Your poem was really nice and so you are now the gold trophy winner and my AP boyfriend, well, I will add you to my AP family list, I hope you do the same, and we can chat as a "couple" (hahaha), you have my email, I got yours. Thanks for participating!!!
kisses!!
"Do Magic"
just me...
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cool!!!
this poem is pretty well, i love the way you describe your feelings and the way you show how much you love this person...
the only thing is that you didnt send the picture which was a RULE in this contest, that's why if you dont send it to me before I judge, you will have less chances than the ones who has sent the picture...
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great!!
this poem is pretty well, i love the way you describe your feelings and the way you show how much you love this person...
the only thing is that you didnt send the picture which was a RULE in this contest, that's why if you dont send it to me before I judge, you will have less chances than the ones who has sent the picture...
good luck!!
(* pau
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Nice expression of your feelings. I must say that the flow of this piece is somewhat choppy, more so from the lines breaks than from your wording. The emotion comes through loud and clear and the thoughts you share are very charged. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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awe, this is cute. I know the feeling of wanting to not be alone and to be with someone you really love. This really captures it! great job
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Another good one great job.. Like i said I am really impressed with your writing abilities...... Great job and they always say if you love someone set them free, if the come back then they're yours and if not it wasn't meant to be.....
Love Always
-Heather -
*sniffle* I loved it, hon.
<333 Cin, hit me up some time. -
Wow! This is really good! She must have been very special to you. I can feel the emotion in this piece. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work! Best of luck to you in everything!
Edited on Jul 01, 1:12 p.m. because 'I needed 2 add stuff'. -
wow.. this is REALLY good! I really like this for it is really interesting and amuzing.. lol... great job! ~Jamie
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