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Lâche

Peace,
I sought death to achieve
Cease
To move, feel, breathe

Lâche
Which stole my flesh, mind, heart
Hush
retribution shall tear you apart.


I used to be content
I used to be free
Not knowing your intent
Or how you would ruin me

I lay in rotting stillness
My decay shall be your end
You took advantage of my illness
A crime you can NOT defend

Love
I thought it was with you
Dove
Of peace and renew

Lâche
Which stole my flesh, mind, heart
Hush
retribution shall tear you apart.


I will come out now
I will rise up
You will wonder how
I fit your body into a single cup

I will speed myself to you
On the back of a nightmare
No longer one of the living who
Say that death can not be there

One
Who took my heart, soul, mind
RUN
For it is you I seek to find

Lâche
Which stole my flesh, mind, heart
Hush
retribution shall tear you apart.


I will take your soul
Lie now in perfect fright
In graves other corpses roll
But you will be mine tonight

I take you now; I like it too
As I slowly begin
To draw the soul out of you
This battle I will win

Gag
In your mouth as you had in mine
Rag
Soaked in your blood of wine

Lâche
Which stole my flesh, mind, heart
Hush
Your conquest shall tear you apart.

Author notes

Lâche means coward in French

Ok I tried to include a lot of things but the basic story that i came up with was that a girl who had killed herself because of her shame of being raped came back from the dead to kill her rapest. When she got to him she took him sexualy to further his punishment- copyed everything he had doen to her and them began to feast on him. :-)

It's just for you ashes2dust666
Written June 29th, 2006

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  • SternBlinkin
    August 8, 2006
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    I like that you explained the story of the poem too. I was beginning to get a little worried about you. But that's lovily, dark yet but lovily all the same. It flows real well as well. I'm impressed - not that I wasn't before with you writing - but you have deffenently gained skill with your writing since I've been off AP. wow...It's got a beat that it follows that keeps the rythum and tension and emotion of the poem alive. Dark yet beautiful.
    Love Jes


  • poisonsilver
    June 30, 2006
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    Thanks. :-)

  • ashes2dust666
    June 29, 2006
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    that was a great piece hun, i'm so glad you entered because i always love your poetry. a beautifully dark story written in such a beautiful way, thank you so much