collage-painting by maa
the sound of my breath
in peaceful harmony with the music of the waves
I am one with the ocean
Author notes
a pixiku is a short original personal quote (thought) of wisdom, humor, knowledge, moral, life experience or beauty etc. that YOU thought of, set up any way you want to in THREE lines.
Written June 29th, 2006
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thank you brenda, for having chosen this poem for leaving your footprint of kindness on its page ...
many blessings to you as well,
marion -
beautifully penned. It brings calmness and comfort to the the readers soul.The picture fits perfectly with this pixiku also..
Thanks for sharing. God bless, Brenda -
your ever enchanting words of wisdom are always so welcome, my dear presence ...
om shanti
maa -
how pleased to meat you, toltec warrior.
thank you for your applause.
when I saw your photograph, it looked like your husband and yourself were two merged into one, only one soul ...
maa
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I understand completely. The seashore is my favorite place for merging with the ONE. This is a refreshing little piece.
namaste~
TW -
We are all part of that ONE great symphony... it is those who stay in tune that produce the most beautiful music. The inner Chord ever manifests in a billion ways, yet there is something so wonderful about the soft silent sound of the human breath... ah, and it is wondrous that You bring us into such a moment as serene assimilation of the wonder that is breath with the breathing of the sea... maa, You are the personification of ONE-ness. ONE Life... ONE Breath... ONE.
You present Serenity so well here... om. -
thank you, dear emma jane, for stopping by and making my heart smile ...
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thank you so much, my dearest rod, for your inspiring and inspired words of wisdom and peace. and for your applause, I thank you as well
you are such a wonderful soul ...
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thank you, dear angel of the sea, for your sensitive and blissful words. I am very touched ...
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thank you shakari for your words of appreciation ...
how sweet of you ... *happy
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thank you, my brother dennis for your encouraging words and applause. makes me so happy ...
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ma très belle lily-belle,
thank you so much for your poetic words and your love.
marion rose
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beautiful hun, just beautiful, and the picture too!
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The rhythmic sound of the surf is such a natural meditative breath pattern, one feels as if one is beng breathed by the ocean, as part of the ocean. And looking at your beautiful artwork, I get a cosmic feeling, one that brings to mind the silent waves of universal sound that are the rhythm of our spiritual breath. This is a heart-filling, heart-opening little piece.
Be ever bright, little sister!
Rod -
Excellent
This is very beautiful and, to me, only a person who knows the feeling of nirvanna (being at one with all things) could write this. I am happy to know that you know the feeling of oneness and have expressed so lovely in this Pixiku too. -
This piece is really beautiful! It has some imagery and sound to it, though I might have caught a metaphor too. Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing!
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Well Done
Marion, This is a beautiful poem/picture presentation. Your artwork is as expressive as your poetry.Well Done.
Dennis
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Dearest Mariananda, this pixiku is a poetic delight with a backdrop of the ocean's scenery. I could smell her waves, hear her whisper, and feel the echoes of her pounding heart-shores. Most magnificent! You brought my soul such peaceful refrains this day. To the beloved rose from her lily.
Edited on Jun 29, 10:47 because 'spell'.
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