Why did you let that person into Our World?
I thought our space was only for us.
I want to understand this whole situation
but the hurt is so deep and I need time to get things straight in my mind and my heart.
I need to sort out my feelings for you, for us and especially myself.
Was I lacking something that you needed?
If I was, you should have told me.
We talked about everything, which is what I loved so much about our relationship.
But somewhere, there was a hole big enough for someone else to fit in.
I love you, nothing can ever change that, but let me have some time to be able to accept you in Our World again.
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Written June 29th, 2006
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This sounds very familiar to me right now because I know of a love triangle. It can either make or break a relationship, but will almost always cause a stir and create distrust. I hope you can resolve your situation - well expressed throughout here! Blissful Princess
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Hm.. this sounds very familar to me only because I've been through the same or at least close. The other person never will realize what hurts they have caused and sometimes I wonder if they {a collective they-could be anyone} really care. Oh, how many times have I cried myself to sleep because reality dictates that I will never be right for whomever I choose.
You expressed yourself very well, I will applaud this. It's like a sisterhood of damaged souls. I wish I wasn't part of that group, but I guess we all are in one way or another. It's time to unite with our partners and stop giving into temptations that only serve a temporary respite to a problem that could be solved easily with a little love!
Great job on this. Damn, I hope I understood it correctly. LOL
Thanks for your comment on my poem too.
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Oh yes..as they say...To thy self, be true.. This was written awhile ago...I appreciate your comments...
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Yes, you thought you talked about everything. Your hurt and frustration really express well within your words! It is good to focus on yourself and what you need when someone else breaks your trust. Worry about you!
Your words express your write very well!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem as well, it is truly appreciated!!
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SO VERY BEAUTIFUL
I can associate with your words so very well, these emotions are so very hard to deal with.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I am humbled constantly with comments by other poets.
Noreen -
I love you, nothing can ever change that, but let me have some time to be able to accept you in Our World again.
Great analytical and touching work indeed...
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Thank you so much. Soulful Woman
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"But somewhere, there was a hole big enough for someone else to fit in." An excellent line! Stellar!
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Cris
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