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surfers like him

every morning she awakens to his shoulder length hair flowing in the sun burnt breeze intense salt watered eyes and sea-chapped  lips approach her daystar rays of light absorbed by their tanning skin waves fulminating daown simutaneousl while he and his wahine gaze past the rising sun with no boundaries and halos of sea stars upon them they walk into the cool sea with grape fruit grin and her strawberry smile they lock eyes and swim out on their surf boards  past the breakers in the sea gull lane we drift peacefully  and converse with one another  care free souls uand seaweed tied hearts togeather sun up sea down below we stand up on top two coconuts cruising  swiftly through the oceans force ful spary to our castle in the sand dunes

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Written June 28th, 2006

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