Her crystal eyes of blue shine like diamonds dad
When she is only thinking of you
I can tell because she tells me she's so in love with us and you
She gives her best in every way and proves it many ways
She holds your hand for no reason and hugs us every day.
When you married her dad you found us the best stepmom ever
And I can tell you love her too
When you look into her crystal eyes of blue.
Author notes
"BLUE"--option #3
Written June 28th, 2006
A contest entry
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Lovely entry good luck
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this was really sweet. it was short, but really good! a cute write
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Very nice. Thank you for entering!
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Good write.
I think many men who have children. Who is with a women not their father, would be happy to hear one of them telling him this.
Verry beautifull.
Love & peace -
Sweet thoughts!
Much appreciated, as there are plenty of stepmoms out there who deserve some kind words!
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yay i love it. subtle amounts of colour as well good write. good luck in the contest -rainy
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Awesome job Im glad you like her. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Awsome job! thank you so much for entering this contest.
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This was touching. I'm glad to hear that your family is not broken like many households today. This was a good way to use the color blue.
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This is really nice. Most people don't get along with their step parents, but you really seem to love your new step mom. That is kind of you to write a poem about her. I like how you used something about. You know the blue crystal eyes. That is really creative.
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This is beautiful. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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this is just excellent i loved it im very glad you love your stepmom and your only 10? holy sh1t this was excellent hugs &
-emily
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