The loneliness is unbearable
I need to be with you
I need to hold you
The world has become such a cold place but I remember your arms and the warmth that I felt when they embraced me
The touch of your lips has almost become a memory,
such a fond memory
I can still feel them softly touching mine
I can still smell you
I can still taste you
You have engulfed my entire being with yours
I have no idea where you end and where I begin
My heart aches for you, my body longs for you and my soul
desires you, even more with each day that we are apart
I had my life worked out and it included you but now I am left without you
I only pray that it is a temporary condition as I could not imagine my life with you
not being in it...
I feel your soul as we are soulmates...you have become my everything and I want
to be your everything..
I want to sleep, eat, and breathe of you...I feel your presence and I
close my eyes and I picture you here with me...
I long to look in your eyes,
to touch your face, your hair and your body..and for you to respond to everyone of my touches..and then I in turn respond to yours and we tumble into the depths of passion
I want to explore the inner and outer you...to reach the depths of your soul and to embrace all the feelings that you have ever known in your life and bring them to the
surface and explore them again with you...
Your touch and love has brought me to tears, such joyous tears and now your absence
brings such sad tears...I miss you, all of you...the past, present and the future you..
Please come back to me...My arms are open, my heart is open...
Please come home to my bed, my heart and my soul
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Written June 28th, 2006
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What would we do without needs? What would we do without love? Our life is a series of hello's and goodbye's. Dealing with loneliness is one of the most difficult things to cope with in our life. This poem said it all. Thank for sharing yur felings and the deepest part of you.
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I don't know of any more deeper expression of your heart and soul than this piece!
Have been in this place and so I know full well how you feel! Awesome writing, my friend! Beautifully poignant! -
I have to chime in with the other replies, you did express alot of heart in this , alot of wonder and sadness withhin the depths of your soul.
I really enjoyed
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This is a good poem that you had penned here your rhythm flowed beaitufully throughout the entire poem good
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excellent =]
wow. this is just amazing! i love the way you put your heart into it. love and sadness are really powerful emotions, and i LOVE how you used them together, this poem is just stunning! great job! -
You really did pour your heart out in this poem. So very moving and emotional. I hope you did well in the contest. This is a very wonderful and endearing write. Thank you for sharing. And I do appreciate you reading and commenting my work as well.
Jeannie D Hunter
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this exceeds cybering and i can feel the depth of the achin heart that lies with in the shell of the lover of lovers... but not always can we have what is not ours to hold...well written .......
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GREAT!! such powerful emotion . this is obviously a piece of your soul and it is so beautiful! the way you express your thoughts just shows how passionate you are towards your work! thank you for sharing, and for reading me as well
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Wow you really put your heart into this, I really like this! Thanks for entering my contest
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